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sunchoFeb 19th 2007 5:29AM

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In a tight language, it is redundant to have separate words for "you" and "your".
Also, the word "army" (designated as place) is not really important one... well, maybe in Israel it is;) I personally will prefer a language primary targeted for kids not to include "army", but then, maybe I am just a hippie ;)
Better put "death" and "taxes" there before "army" :)))

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